Talk:How the 'A' Stole Christmas/@comment-25160183-20141112031707/@comment-25367367-20141112035829

Just got done reading it!! Those steamy scenes had me on the floor drowning in my own tears (: you shouldn't take out the sex scenes. Trust me I wouldn't think you are a perv because it's just a fictional story! The beginning was the best part how she fantasized about Ali! The story was a little bit all over the place, but I know once you get your mind set on how you want to tell the story it won't be that way anymore. Over all I loved it.

Oh have you been keeping up with that other Emison fanfic??